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Percy Response #1

....was due Tuesday 9/11.

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- 3 negative examples & a model
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Question

Concentrate on section one of "The Loss of the Creature."

There are many specific portraits of travelers in this section (the explorer Cardenas, a sightseer with a camera, a family marooned during an outbreak of typhus, an American couple in Mexico, a young man in France, etc.).

All of these portraits are biased to some extent; which one of them seems to you the most questionable? Use details involved in the portrait you pick to expose Percy's assumptions.

What lesson do we as readers learn from Percy’s presentation of this portrait?

Cardenas paragraphs: 3 false starts & a model

False start 1. In "The Loss of the Creature", by Walker Percy, he talks about experiencing things. You have to get off the beaten path. Society stops people from seeing things for themselves. I think this is really true. I liked the part about Garcia Lopez de Cardenas. "One crosses miles of desert, breaks through the mesquite, and there it is at one’s feet."

False start 2. At the beginning of "The Loss of the Creature," Walker Percy starts by describing Garcia Lopez de Cardenas. He discovered the Grand Canyon after crossing miles of desert. It was beautiful to him because he was the first to see it. But now that the government has made it a national park, we can’t see it like this. Percy says that if seeing the Canyon had a value of "P" for Cardenas, then now we only get a millionth part of "P" today.

False start 3. Walker Percy is a racist. I couldn’t believe how he says that Indians don’t count as people, and how he just assumes that the Spanish guy had all these emotions. How does he know? He wasn’t there.


Model. Percy credits Garcia Lopez de Cardenas with "discover[ing]" (511) the Grand Canyon, laying eyes on it before anyone else. Percy assumes that only Cardenas is able to see the Grand Canyon "for what it is" (512); sightseers coming after him can never have this experience. But this assumption is shaky.

The picture of Cardenas at the Grand Canyon is sheer conjecture: no actual documents back up Percy’s claims. In fact, the sing-song description of Cardenas’s discovery ("…breaks through the mesquite, and there it is at one’s feet"(511)) highlights the artificiality of this fantasy. Percy’s pseudo-analytic labeling of Cardenas’s discovery as "a certain value P" (511) continues the charade. It’s curious that Percy uses "P" rather than a more mathematical "X" in this phrase—is it a coincidence that our author is stamping this description with his own initial?

These opening tricks should put Percy’s reader on guard. Percy is doing two things at once: he’s railing against "formulated" (512) experience, and also giving us a demonstration of how easy it is to fall into blindness thanks to preformulation. By coating Cardenas with fantasy, Percy loses sight of the actual explorer, ironically demonstrating the same failure to perceive that he denounces.

Actual response: class favorite

In the essay The Loss of the Creature, Walker Percy made a few points about feelings that I too have had. Percy’s statement about the sightseer’s satisfaction being based on "the degree to which [it] conforms to the preformed complex" (566) is too true for today’s tourists. All that seems to matter is whether "it" lives up to its expectations.

I can relate to Percy’s dilemma about loss of sovereignty because when I visited Europe and saw the Eiffel tower for the first time it seemed as if "something was wrong" (566). No matter how hard I tried to enjoy the remarkable sight in front of me I could only feel like I was being spoon-fed the experience. Upon arrival everyone marched to the elevators and rode to the peak. Then, at the top of the tower everyone got out, took pictures, and went back down. During what should have been a highlight of my life, I felt "simply bored" (566).

One can assume that Percy isn’t too fond of preformed situations. However, that is exactly the kind of situation that Percy puts his readers into when he is bias to their opinions and only offers his own answers about how to recover "it." Percy proposes the question "how can the sightseer recover [it]?" (566) to open the minds of his readers, but his only reason for that question is so he can stuff his answers into their heads. Percy has done what he previously preached not to do and preformed a situation where only his opinion and advice are acceptable. After proposing the question his next four paragraphs/thoughts all begin with, "It may be recovered by...". Percy is relentless in his attempt to provide examples, in order to keep his readers from calling his bias thoughts. Percy may be biased in his examples, but he is much worse towards his readers.