Percy Bysshe Shelley's sonnet "Ozymandias" is
undoubtedly one of his most popular poems. Since the mid-nineteenth
century, it has been anthologized countless times. Today, most
educated people will have come across the poem. Its length and
directness lend it to study in schools. Surprisingly, however,
it has gotten little attention critically. This is probably due
to the same factors which make it so popular: its simplicity and
its shortness might make it seem unworthy of critical investigation.
Indeed, its publication history suggests the poem, although true
to Shelley's beliefs, originated more out of the author's public
and social life and was not written with the intent of canonization.
Ozymandias was first published in Leigh Hunt's Examiner of
January 11, 1818.(Everest 34) Hunt was a close friend of Shelley's.
There was no difficulty for Shelley in getting this work published.
The men were among the same literary and social circle and shared
the same anti-authoritarian views. The sonnet was published over
the name Glirastes, which was a name derived from an inside joke
which started while the Shelleys were living at Marlow in 1817.
The word means 'doormouse-lover'. 'Doormouse' was a petname Percy
had for Mary during this period.(Everest 34)
Recently, the couples' social life
had rapidly increased upon their moving in with the Hunts in February
and subsequently making the acquaintances
of Keats, Reynolds, Lamb, Hazlitt, the Cowden Clarkes, and others.(Bradley
36) 'Ozymandias' can be seen as a clever bid by Shelley to impress his
newfound friends. Shelley's notorious intellectual conversations had apparently
yielded a friendly competition on the topic between him and Horace Smith.
The poem was written between December 26 and 28 1817, during which time
Smith was a guest at Marlow with the Shelleys. Horace has a poem on a very
similar subject published in the Examiner on February 1 1818.(Everest
In its initial publication, it is
evident through its editing first of all that Shelley was not much
involved and also that the poem was carelessly
printed. The quotation marks opened on the second line are never closed!
Furthermore, the two lines attributed directly to the tyrant Ozymandias
read, "'My name is OZYMANDIAS, King of Kings.'/ Look on my words,
ye Mighty, and despair!"(Hunt 24) Of the two lines printed on the
pedestal, only one is put into quotation marks. The overcapitalization
of this version, most notable in the "visually mannered" spelling
of 'OZYMANDIAS', is not present in Shelley's rough drafts found in his
journals. This suggests Hunt's editorial domination over this first printed
version. Hunt himself was very prone to plentiful capitalization.
It is probable that Hunt, the editor
himself was involved in or at least aware of the competition which
fathered the sonnet. He later accidentally sent
'Ozymandias' to Keats' editor as the sonnet 'To the Nile', which is known
definitively to have been written by Shelley in competition with Keats
and Hunt in 1818.(Rollins 182) These competitions were commonplace among
Shelley's circle and yielded much of the participants' shorter works. 'Ozymandias'
is unique in that it has gained so much recognition for what was, essentially,
a knock-off poem.
Ozymandias's second publication was in Shelley's Rosalind
and Helen volume of 1819, where it is included as one of
a "few scattered poems I left in England." In his 'Advertisement',
Shelley points out that the poem was selected for the book by
his 'bookseller' and not by himself. By his reference to the
poem in such nonchalant terms as "scattered" and by
his rejection of responsibility for its presence in his new volume
of long, heavy poetry, it is obvious that Shelley is not particularly
proud of this piece. Speech marks have in this edition been repaired
to properly match Shelley's intent as seen in his journals, and "OZYMANDIAS" has
been brought back down notch to "Ozymandias". There
is nothing to suggest that the Rosalind and Helen text
was treated with a corrected manuscript supplied by Shelley,
but critics agree that it is truer to Shelley because it more
resembles the forms of presentation in the poems which he did
personally guide through the press. Still, this version, not
controlled by Shelley in its printing, diverges from the version
of Shelley's journals in major ways. Most notable is its change
of "dessert" to "desart". This spelling gives
the word a more archaic feel, giving a different impression of
the story-teller and making his story itself seem more fanciful
and less ironically objective than in other versions. Whether
Shelley favored this mutation and its consequences remains uncertain,
but the effect was probably not so strong on the reader of his
time. Today it has been changed back to "desert". When
the poem was again published by Mary Shelley in 1839 after Percy
Shelley's death, it was based on the version from Rosalind
and Helen. Almost all subsequent editions of the nineteenth
century come from Mary Shelley's version.(Everest 37)
The main intellectual inspiration
for this poem was, of course, Shelley's strong distaste for tyranny.
Given his natural rebellious nature, it is likely
the poem alludes to the modern rule of England. In March of the same year,
habeas corpus had been suspended for government fear of pressures to reform.(Bradley
37) Later, in November, three men were hanged and mutilated for leading
the Pentridge Revolution (a workers' uprising) which occurred in June.
This prompted Shelley's An Address to the People which cannot be
found in print today but which points out the injustices of the government.(Bradley
The structure of the poem itself is
a sign of Shelley's rebelliousness. Shelley wrote few sonnets. Not
surprisingly, when he does write one with Ozymandias, it
goes against the grain of accepted sonnet format. Ozymandias experiments
with the sonnet form. Its rhyme scheme is odd and hard to follow: ababacdcedefef.
Also, it makes notable use of disorienting half-rhymes like "stone"/"frown" and "appear"/"bare".
It is utterly ironic that what was
written as a vitriol against the arrogance of man exemplified by
the surviving yet unfounded pride of a long-dethroned
tyrant can be seen in retrospect as a confession of the author's own pride
above all else. Not to say that Percy Shelley was a 'tyrant' in his own
field, but it is true that the poet did yield tremendous influence during
his time in the literary realm and today is one of the least-studied Romantic
poets. It was just as easy for Shelley to get his friend to publish Ozymandias in
the Examiner as it presumably was for his character Ozymandias to
commission his sculptor to immortalize him in stone. Likewise, just as
it was possible for the artist to mock Ozymandias, as some analyses argue, "whose
frown,/ And wrinkled lips, & sneer of cold command,/ Tell that its
sculptor well those passions read", so did the actual distributors
of Ozymandias take poetic license with Shelley's poem, changing
its meaning, slightly as they did, in the process.
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Everest, Kelvin, Ed. Essays and Studies
1992: Percy Bysshe Shelley. 'Ozymandias:
The Text in Time, Kelvin Everest. Cambridge: Brewer, 1992.
Examiner No. 524 11
January 1818. Ed. Hunt
Rollins, Hyder Edward. The Keatz Circle,
2 volumes. Cambridge, Massachusetts: Cambridge, 1965.