Simultaneous Merging Spheres:
How a Venn-Diagram Best Represents the "Ode"
by Al Provinziano
The purpose of my essay is to expose the submerged
argumentative address to the reader. I chose a modified Venn-diagram
because it allows access to show how the different spheres of address
and reception interweave to present Keats's "Ode on a Grecian
Urn."
The author is represented as an axis through the spheres
because he orders the poem, gives it a stanza and rhyme structure,
along with the implicit aesthetic philosophy behind the poem. The
author's color is gray because he has an opaque explicit presence
in the poem. He tries to submerge the structure of the poem in the
dialogue between the speaker and the urn. Therefore, in symmetry
with the poem, the author is represented in the other spheres as
merely a dotted line because his presence is submerged - like the
structure and order he provides - in the other spheres of reception
in the poem.
The speaker is red because brightness is associated
with intense emotions which represents the speaker's empathy for
the Urn's images. The speaker's words are also rounded to represent
his emotional qualities, in contrast to the completely straight
words of the author (not to imply Keats didn't empathize with his
speaker, but that his presence in the poem is very structural).
The Urn is blue because it is a "cold pastoral; blue represents
a lack of exuberant emotions, and a still remove from communication.
However, the script is in an orange cursive because, just as cursive
is a stylized form of writing, the urn is a highly stylized piece
of art--especially in its images. The reader is yellow because its
the lightest color on the graph and signifies how the reader's role
is less intrusive, but more observational.
In terms of interactions between the spheres, there
is more mergance between the speaker and the Urn because they have
a more direct interaction in the poem. This interaction is represented
by the yellow-red pulsating line on the border of the two spheres.
This line follows the course of the two sphere's interaction by
moving from a disunited point to one of fusion. However, this fusion
occurs away from the speaker because it is not something which the
reader is necessarily a part of. In contrast, the mergance of the
reader and the speaker's spheres focuses on the words "ours
and "us; the reader is invited to become a part of the experience
of the poem, but can choose not to enter that fusion of emotions;
therefore, there is one line of the pulsating line close to the
reader's sphere, which show the ability of the speaker to access
the empathy of the speaker.
The zig-zag lines at the mergance of the three spheres
represents how my argument disrupts the reception of the Ode because
the poem wants to submerge the simultaneous address and contrasting
uses of the urn, in the dialogue between the speaker and the Urn.
Additionally, the structure of the author for the poem is represented
at the mergance of the author and reader's sphere because these
aspects of the poem are more for the reader, in order to make the
philosophy in the poem easier to understand. In conclusion, this
diagram is not done by a computer, but by hand in order to show
the emotional involvement of its creator in the text, just as the
Greeks placed emotions in their hand-crafted urns and Keats, in
his hand-penned manuscript.
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