III
A gentle answer did the old Man make,
In courteous speech which forth he slowly drew:
And him with further words I thus bespake,
"What occupation do you there pursue?
This is a lonesome place for one like you."
Ere he replied, a flash of mild surprise
Broke from the sable orbs of his yet-vivid eyes,
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His words came feebly, from a feeble chest,
But each in solemn order followed each,
With something of a lofty utterance drest-
Choice word and measured phrase, above the reach
Of ordinary men; a stately speech;
Such as grave Livers do in Scotland use,
Religious men, who give to God and man their dues.
Wordsworth is the solitary "Traveller" experiencing
nature in all its glory, and it is an experience not to be shared-sharing
would halve the joy. It is a little egotistical because Wordsworth
wants to emphasize that it is he who chooses what and who to represent
nature and human nature; therefore it is important not to have Dorothy's
presence in this passage. Wordsworth wants to stress the importance
of the moment between the leech gatherer and Wordsworth himself.
It is a conversation between men, and Dorothy, a woman, would serve
as a distraction. Not only that, she could add her own personal views
to the scene and Wordsworth probably believes that his views are
better than hers even though she may add another level or dimension
to the passage. She could give a different and interesting perspective
on the leech gatherer and nature, thereby putting the focus and attention
on her and Wordsworth wants it to be all his. In a way, he is patronizing,
assuming that her ideas are not as important as his are, but he would
entertain them should the occasion be suitable. (Like in Tintern
Abbey-she fits his purpose and therefore he uses her, making that
poem a reflection of the past and present.)
Also, he may not want Dorothy in this poem because he would then
have to add in a secondary emotional tone: student looking up to
mentor. He would have to change the poem to fit her in. Although
he loves Dorothy very much, I have a sneaky suspicion that he believes
that his ideas are far loftier than hers-consider Tintern Abbey-and
using her in a poem may cause the reader to feel differently toward
the poem, concentrating and focusing on her instead of him. He doesn't
want to explain her presence. This passage is solely about him and
his views; he is the focus here. Even the leech gatherer is secondary:
it is Wordsworth's perception of nature and the leech gatherer that
holds the poem.
In this passage, it is also
crucial not to have Dorothy as it may cause the leech gatherer
to be shy and reluctant
to speak in the
presence of a lady. Readers of that era would know that at once,
and Wordsworth believes that he represents the common man and should
know the mannerisms of the people. After all, the old man gathers
leeches, a ghastly job. Also, the leech gatherer may not want to
speak to two people-it is too intimidating and Wordsworth is already
so patronizing. To have these two look upon him kindly and pityingly
because he is but a common man would be excruciating. Wordsworth
questions the poor man exceedingly; it seems almost intrusive. Perhaps
Dorothy would have stopped his rudeness. "What do you do" "How
do you live?" are impertinent questions!
Wordsworth also uses the leech gatherer for his own purpose-it is
an opportunity for him to look toward the common man and generalize
the old man's personality. It is significant that the old man is
a leech gatherer, for a leech can give negative connotations-it sucks
the blood out of the human body. Is it too far fetched to assume
that Wordsworth does the same to the leech gatherer by dissecting
his life and presence on this earth? On the other hand, leeches can
be good, as it does suck the poison out of the sick person. Once
again, Wordsworth presents two different perspectives to the reader.
He does this a lot in this poem to evoke an emotional response from
the reader. An overall reading of the poem will show that there are
almost always two images: a cheery optimism and a reflective pessimism.
He would be happy, then get melancholy as he ponders on the common
man. Again, Dorothy's presence here would be quite jarring, as he
would have to figure out how to present her perspective, however
interesting it may be.
Pauline Teoh
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